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Illus of my OC.

Art (c) :iconcoffee-straw-luzi:
Character (c) :iconcoffee-straw-luzi:

Tool:
- Wacom Bamboo
- Adobe Photoshop CS3 (Color Filter)
- Paint Tool SAI (Sketch & Coloring)
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:iconviki-u:
Hello, you asked for a critique so here i go :iconlazeplz:

Positives:
To start of I think you did a very amazing job. The detail in this is beautiful and the use of colour is definite eye candy. You show very good technique and understanding of anatomy, the character himself has a simple yet creative and stunning design.

Negatives:
I have very few problems with this picture to be honest. First being, the position of his animal eyes, especially his left (his left not ours) one, it is too far up his head i think and should be lower/more on the side of his head and not bolt up on the top of his head. Lastly, the light source is alittle confusing: I'm guessing the sunset is behind him (that is what the effect suggests anway) yet his face and hair are lighted as if the light source is infront of him. There is also a blue light source underneath him but there isn't much of it reflecting on him: just a bit on his clothes but not on his face or hair.

I hope this helped, and despite the negatives I think you should be really proud of this piece, and I look forward to seeing more from you :heart:
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:iconlady-paladin-skye:
Lady-Paladin-Skye Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Stunning--Absolutely stunning. Amazing characer. Very detailed.
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:iconmaplefly:
Maplefly Featured By Owner May 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a wonderful picture- I love the background and the pose; there is a real sense of motion and creativity in this.
I'm jealous of your talent, and amazing piece of artwork :D
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:iconmaripocket:
MariPocket Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing!!
I love the way you did the clouds and lights of the hair
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:iconekknight:
EKKnight Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice sky
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uchuubranko Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello! :w00t:
Your art has been featured in my M. Features Vol. 3 ! :deviation: [link] :deviation:
Please don't forget to :+fav: and maybe look a bit through it ? :iconiloveit-plz: so that many deviants can see it! :hug:
Keep up the wonderful work! :love:
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:iconcoffee-straw-luzi:
Coffee-Straw-LuZi Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank You! XD
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:iconnyiana-sama:
Nyiana-sama Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
:wave: Hello! I’m here to let you know that this deviation has been featured in the news article Manga/Anime Monthly Features Vol. 41! Please be sure to check out and :+fav: the article, as well as support the other artists that were featured!
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:iconbloodlust-okami:
Bloodlust-Okami Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing. ;-;
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:iconleinef:
leinef Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awesome work *_* I love the drapery, the coloring and the details! Amazing <3
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:iconeabhe:
Eabhe Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cute
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:iconxiliia:
xiliia Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
Amazing!!
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:iconqueen-of-butterflies:
Queen-of-Butterflies Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
jdslfjiwjfso amazing! the coloring and details!!!! :iconruncryplz: it's too awesome! :D
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:iconyamikou:
Yamikou Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this is awesome you know :)
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:iconia-sen:
ia-sen Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
honestly, this drawing needs more comments!
Its practically amazing!
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:iconaoicake:
AoiCake Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really good!
keep that up! c:
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:iconneudyx:
Neudyx Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
So Awesome!!
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:iconrosemarytran:
rosemarytran Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
omg awesome @@!
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:iconiphenixia:
iPhenixia Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Amazing !!
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:iconkukuchangmin:
kukuchangmin Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
This is awesome O_O
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:iconpiccohan:
piccohan Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
amazing!
this is so pretty!
all the colors and the details! :iconsobeautifulplz:

love this!:iconlubplz:
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:iconakasunakage:
AkasunaKage Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Ow. :iconmypervnosebleedplz:
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:iconxcrushx17:
xcrushx17 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why must you draw so good? *Envious* The pose is bad arse and the coloring and shading is amazing! Good job!
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:iconinterstellarshadow:
InterstellarShadow Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Pretty Sweet.
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:iconannieheart12:
annieheart12 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! :clap: :squee:
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